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“_________.”
“…”
“_________!”
“…”
“__________!!!”
“What?”
Al was at his wits end with this girl.  The girl was _________, a chick he captured from the Axis.  She’d be their prisoner until at least the end of the war, but he was starting to wonder if it was a good idea to capture her.  He was hoping to have an obedient little servant girl, but instead he got a loudmouthed slacker.
“You were supposed to be cleaning this place while I was gone!” Al yelled.
“Why should I have to listen to you?” said _________, who was lounging on Al’s couch.
“Because you’re my prisoner! I captured you!  You’re supposed to do what I say!”
“I don’t have to listen to you!  I can get out of here easily!” __________ boasted.
“Oh really?...” Al smirked, grabbing his trusty bat.
“That doesn’t scare me,” _________ says watching Al get the bat.
“Well, how about now?” Al rose the bat up in the air.  Immediately, _________ rolled from her spot on the couch and onto the floor, taking out a (melee weapon of choice).
“Try me, big boy!” _________ shouted.
With these words, the two of them begin to fight.  Al thought this would be no sweat, but much to his surprise, as the fight progressed, each of them pulling off their best moves and moving the fight to outside, _________ was able to keep up with him the entire time.  How the hell was she able to dodge and fight back so easily?  She didn’t fight NEARLY as hard as when they first fought.  The two of them continued sparing until the sun set, when they were no longer able to fight.  The two of them collapsed on the ground side by side, breathing heavily.
“Damn…” Al muttered, trying to catch his breath, “Where the hell did all of that come from?...”
_________ let out a few laughs, “Heheheh… Did you really think that I was really as bad as I was when we first battled?... nah… THIS is what I fight like…”
“What?... You mean… you LET me win?...”
“Yeah… you guys are WAY more fun… than the Axis…” _________ smirked up at Al, rolling over so that she was facing him.
“Heh… that’s new…” Al said, smirking back, “You know… that was a lot of fun…”
“Yeah… sure was…” _________ laid her head on Al’s chest.  Normally, Al would’ve shoved her off had it been anyone else, but he was too tired to care.  Plus, to his surprise, he actually found something he liked about her.  Her tenacity, strength, and energy matched his own.  She didn’t care what people thought about her.  In many ways… she was like a sister to him.  He looked down to see she had already passed out from exhaustion.  He petted her head, watching her lips form a smile.  Laying his head back, he let his own eyes close and got some rest.
A few hours later, he felt a foot nudge at his side.
“Al?  You awake?” his brother Matt asked.  Al opened up an eye looking up at his brother.
“Hey Matt, what are you doing?” Al asked.
“I was just about to ask you the same thing; I called you 3 hours ago and you never answered,” Matt scolded, “And who the hell’s this?”
“Who?” Al muttered, before looking down to see _________ still lying beside him, “Oh!  This is _________.”
At the mention of her name, _________’s eyes opened, as she looked up at Matt. “Sup,” she greeted him.
“You mean this is the girl you captured?” Matt said.
“I wouldn’t say that,” _________ spoke with a grin.
“Whatever,” Matt grunted, “Look, I need your help.”
“What is it?” Al asked.
“Remember the guy that borrowed money from us a few weeks ago?”
“Right off the back of my head.  Why?”
“He ain’t paying back… so I thought I’d bring in a few big guns…”
“Awesome!  We get to smash some skulls!”
Al and _________ stood up from the ground, both picking up their weapons.
“Sweet!” _________ squealed, “Can I come too?”
Matt shot a glare at _________, “No you cannot.  You are to stay here.”
“Awwww…” _________ started to give off her usual “bambi eyes and pouting face” combo to silently plead with Matt.  Sadly, Matt wasn’t amused.
“Hey, how ‘bout this,” Al said, putting a hand on _________’s shoulder, “Next time something like this comes up, it’ll just be you and me.  That alright?”
_________ smiled widely and said, “Sure!”
“Alright.  Just wait back at home for me.  I’ll be back in a few hours.”
With that, _________ ran off back to Al’s house, much to Matt’s confusion.
“Since when were you a softie?” Matt asked.
“Hey, she got me in a good mood,” Al replied.
When Al captured _________, he expected to have an obedient little servant girl.  
Instead… he got a sister.
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SwaggerJr Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Student General Artist
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xXamazingpandaXx Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015  Student Writer
BRING IT FRACK BOI. *brings out....a sheet of a paper and lemons* IMMA PAPER CUT YA TO DEATH. 
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love2draw2 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Friend zoned ;-;
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:icon123coolness:
123Coolness Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Student Filmographer
...What
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:iconjazzy-jazzy-woo-woo:
Jazzy-Jazzy-Woo-Woo Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Immediately, MS.AWESOMENESS rolled from her spot on the couch and onto the floor, taking out a GIANT GILBIRD PLUSHIE!!!!! XD
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BETHDrown Featured By Owner Edited Jul 19, 2014  Student Artist
Weapon of choice? :iconprussiaraveplz:
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:iconfinlandraveplz:
:icondenmarkraveplz:
These are my weapons B)
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:iconjaybirdiehetalia9221:
Oh my gawd!! I love this!! This should be a series!! Great job!!!
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:iconmindless-genius:
Mindless-Genius Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*takes out giant popscicle*
you wanna go boi
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:iconkailanuchiha:
KailanUchiha Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*facefloors* *rolls and laughs hard* Y U H8 MEH PAPER SAN?!?!?! WAI??!?!?!  
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Sanactras Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Student
That was the funniest ever...
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:iconmindless-genius:
Mindless-Genius Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
omfh really thank you 
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Sanactras Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Student
XD Yeah. Np! :3
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polkadotnot Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
Dang...these comments.. cant... breathe!
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:iconkurino-sama-alpha:
kurino-sama-alpha Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
i can't breathe either!!!!!!
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thisisadecentname Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
My epic weapon is AWESOMER than all yours

Troll  hue hue hue TROLL FACE HAS BEEN EQUIPED!!!!!
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:iconmeepilybuff:
Meepilybuff Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
Master Sword against nail-studded baseball bat...
*le cuts in half* Oh my, how did that happen? :iconsarcasmplz:
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:iconhyo38:
Hyo38 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*pulls out Claw gauntlets* Let's dance f*cker.
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:iconlunaflyaway:
lunaflyaway Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
BECH PLZ! I pulled out a road roller! I'm going vocaloid in this bech!
COME AT ME BRO!
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:iconsailormoon6708:
Sailormoon6708 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*pulls out bass clarinet* Just try me...
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:iconaimi-puffin:
Aimi-Puffin Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
2pMe: *pulls out chainsaw* Bring it on bitch! *smirks*

Al:......Fuck.......
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hetaliaireland15 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
* TAKES OUT MY FENCING SWORD ( AND YES I DO FENCING!!!)*   


BRING IT ON BOY!!! AND * SMIRKS*
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:iconlunakittyartist99:
LunaKittyArtist99 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Student Artist
2p me: *pulls out a mechanical pencil* bring it on bitch *smirks*
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:iconterraareli:
TerraAreli Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*shudders*
Watch OUT! HE'S GOT A PENCIL!
*waves spoon*
I GOT A SPOON AND I AIN'T AFRAID TO SCOOP YA!
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:iconlunakittyartist99:
LunaKittyArtist99 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student Artist
2P me: *laughs darkly*
(my 2P is a girl by the way)
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:iconterraareli:
TerraAreli Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ahem*
He/she (sorry)
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:iconbrutallyawesome108:
brutallyawesome108 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
(Melee weapon of choice) *pulls out chainsaw* does this count ?*cute russia smile*

Al:.......shit.......
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ClassicGamerGirl Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
weapon of choice you ask *Evil laugh* *pulls out a spoon* fear the all mighty spoon! But Why a Spoon? 
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ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg lolz!! My friends CP chara uses a spoon! And we both joke that her are going to stab someone with a spoon!
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ClassicGamerGirl Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha everyone should fear the worlds most dangerous object also know as the common house spoon :3
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helenadoodle Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
ohonhon~ I likes
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xXHitsujiChanXx Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
2P! Me: *pulls out my big ass blood red sword* This is my weapon of choice badass no? :iconscarysmileplz:
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DrawingWolfGirl Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Melee weapon of choice?......Romano (Mustache Laughs) [V1] 
*le evil grin* The ultimate weapon.....
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:iconkotetsufan:
Kotetsufan Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
You look like Mario and the one taking damage for that is you cuz :icon2pamericaplz: with a 'stache? Not a good combo :iconfrancederpplz:
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DrawingWolfGirl Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
XD But its so evil! Prussia (Evil Sneaky Plan) [V5] TChiBark 
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:iconkotetsufan:
Kotetsufan Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Hahaha xD it's evil only that it makes you look funny
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AmuletAmethyst Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Student General Artist
(melee weapon of choice) hmmmmm......*LE GASP* *pulls out giant lollipop* this count?
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ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I believe it does! :D
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AmuletAmethyst Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Student General Artist
*SMASHES EVERYTHING*
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:iconsilentgirl888:
SilentGirl888 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
(melee weapon of choice), OKAI! I'll have a sonic screwdriver!
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Fireblade626 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh my god I laughed at this much harder than I should.
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:iconsilentgirl888:
SilentGirl888 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
If all weapons fail, use a screwdriver
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:iconangel-of-hetalia:
angel-of-hetalia Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student General Artist
*Comes across wooden lock* DANG IT! * Daleks appear* I'M NOT THE DOCTOR!
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:iconsilentgirl888:
SilentGirl888 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*le gasp* :Sonic: SONIC SCREWDRIVER POWERS! ACTIVATE!!!!! DESTROY THE DALEKS!Sonic Screwdriver Dalek on a Mission 
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:iconangel-of-hetalia:
angel-of-hetalia Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student General Artist
* The Master appears*
Me: WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!
The Doctor: *Readies screwdriver* Run.
Me: YOU'RE REAL! WHERE'S THE TARDIS AND AMY AND OH MY GOSH! *explodes*
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SilentGirl888 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
OMG, OMG, OMFG! *spazz attack* CNIJFECNEFIJW- THE DOCTOR!
The Doctor: Daleks, The Master, look at these people, these human beings, consider their potential. From the day they arrive on this planet and blinking, step into the sun, there is more to see than can ever be seen, more to do... no, hold on... sorry, that's the Lion King... but the point still stands! Leave them alone! Or I will have to make you.
Daleks: Exterminate!
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:iconangel-of-hetalia:
angel-of-hetalia Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Trust me.
I'm the doctor.
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PrussiaLover01 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
haha i friend-zoned his a** oh yea im cool like dat ;)
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:iconmaplegirlhetalia:
maplegirlhetalia Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
(melee weapon of choice) *pulls a gigantic hammer out of seemingly nowhere* This count?
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:iconprussialover01:
PrussiaLover01 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
lovely i just took out my trusty Machete haha
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